The Mirthful Spring
When the shadows of the long trees
draped me in themselves
When the silent cool breeze
blew through my hair
When the joyful flowers
merrily touched the Earth
I could surely feel
the graceful spring over and above
The sun shone brightly
and the clouds floated high
The melody of the birds was filled
in the blue ocean of the sky
I hope that this beauty never dies
I hope it comes back
As I would patiently wait
to twirl in the spring again
MY VIEW-
I have written this poem in keeping the admiration and beauty of spring in my mind. The most beautiful part of spring for me is the blooming flowers which ultimately bring a smile to my face. After the winters, everything around seems lively. Let's not forget the charm of spring and as the year marches ahead not forget its glamour.
Awesome work 👍🏻
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DeleteBeautiful poem
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DeleteBeautifully articulated. 👌
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DeleteLovely poem!! Loved it absolutely :-) Feels as fresh as the first drop of the morning dew. This poem is the best so far )).....Keep writing Baccha!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for such a motivating response! I hoped everyone felt lively and happy after reading the poem. Will always keep writing.. :)
DeleteYes indeed! This one is at the next level considering your age :-) Hope to see the next one coming soon. Waiting.... :-)
DeleteBeautifully expressed Arushi!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much ^_^
DeleteOne of the greatest ones by you Arushi
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