Grandma's Whisper

 Part-2 of The girl in the field

I started walking towards my home. I was scared and wasn’t able to say a word from my mouth. I started wondering that if that girl was a devil who may have possessed me. I was sure that I was going to scolded if I was not home before sunrise so, I started walking faster with my broken slippers in my hands the sunrise was going to set up and I was home in my small but cozy room, uncle was fast asleep. For sure I was not able to take a nap because of my ruined night and my uncle’s snoring. I started distracting myself by watching the immense sunrise but it didn’t helped whenever I saw out the scene of night is reminded to me. I was happy that just then my aunt entered the room and started making the dozed off uncle awake and up to work. I got out of the room shivering and headed towards my grandma’s room. It was my favourite place in our home I am used to sit on the window and hear stories from her. Whenever I asked her is the story true she won’t answer.  But this time it was a little different. I got in her room and made me comfortable on her old and only room in the home. I didn’t hide anything from grandma; she was the only one to help me out. Before I could say anything grandma asked me,”whats’s the matter my child, you look little wired today.”I knew she got it that I was hiding something but I reacted normal. I wasn’t able to look in her deep blue mysterious eyes. My day went in wandering through the market as the sun started to set I found my way back to home and it was time for grandma’s story. I started being normal and forgetting everything. I asked grandma if I could spend night with her and she allowed me. I was now happy that my life will fall back to normal. We both adjusted ourselves in the old but comfortable bed. Grandma started the story ,she described a family and a boy who was a part of it, everything was fine but then my grandma started narrating the things which has happened to me. I was turning pale blue like sky as such I was driven into great danger. I tried to stop her but she won’t. I started searching for water, making things fall here and there. I almost swallowed the whole water at once when she said the girl possessed children and take them in deep woods and never returned them.



And there comes the end. I don’t have words express how I felt I rolled myself in my grandma and started thinking that what had happened to me was truly horrifying. I was blank my grandma pulled me back and whispered  to me in her screeching low and old voice, “you saw her didn’t you?”

-Arushi Sinha

Comments

  1. Wow!! The attention to details while describing each feeling, every move, the surroundings and characterization of the little girl is truly exceptional.

    Keep writing Aaru Beta!! Now waiting for the third part of spine chilling story of your mysterious girl!

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    1. thank you. The next part will com soon! : )

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    2. Thank you baccha!! Waiting eagerly for the next thrilling episode...just a small guidance, hope you do not mind.....Pls pay special attention to exclamation, full stop, comma ,etc.

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    3. Thank you Uncle for guiding me. I will try to work on it : )

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