Grandma's Whisper
Part-2 of The girl in the field
I started walking towards my home. I
was scared and wasn’t able to say a word from my mouth. I started wondering
that if that girl was a devil who may have possessed me. I was sure that I was
going to scolded if I was not home before sunrise so, I started walking faster
with my broken slippers in my hands the sunrise was going to set up and I was
home in my small but cozy room, uncle was fast asleep. For sure I was not able
to take a nap because of my ruined night and my uncle’s snoring. I started
distracting myself by watching the immense sunrise but it didn’t helped
whenever I saw out the scene of night is reminded to me. I was happy that just
then my aunt entered the room and started making the dozed off uncle awake and
up to work. I got out of the room shivering and headed towards my grandma’s
room. It was my favourite place in our home I am used to sit on the
window and hear stories from her. Whenever I asked her is the story true she
won’t answer. But this time it was a
little different. I got in her room and made me comfortable on her old and only
room in the home. I didn’t hide anything from grandma; she was the only one to
help me out. Before I could say anything grandma asked me,”whats’s the matter
my child, you look little wired today.”I knew she got it that I was hiding
something but I reacted normal. I wasn’t able to look in her deep blue
mysterious eyes. My day went in wandering through the market as the sun started
to set I found my way back to home and it was time for grandma’s story. I
started being normal and forgetting everything. I asked grandma if I could
spend night with her and she allowed me. I was now happy that my life will fall
back to normal. We both adjusted ourselves in the old but comfortable bed.
Grandma started the story ,she described a family and a boy who was a part of
it, everything was fine but then my grandma started narrating the things which
has happened to me. I was turning pale blue like sky as such I was driven into
great danger. I tried to stop her but she won’t. I started searching for water,
making things fall here and there. I almost swallowed the whole water at once
when she said the girl possessed children and take them in deep woods and never
returned them.
And there
comes the end. I don’t have words express how I felt I rolled myself in my
grandma and started thinking that what had happened to me was truly horrifying.
I was blank my grandma pulled me back and whispered to me in her screeching low and old voice,
“you saw her didn’t you?”
-Arushi Sinha
Love u my doll
ReplyDeletePobby Maasi
thanks love you too
DeleteWow!! The attention to details while describing each feeling, every move, the surroundings and characterization of the little girl is truly exceptional.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing Aaru Beta!! Now waiting for the third part of spine chilling story of your mysterious girl!
thank you. The next part will com soon! : )
DeleteThank you baccha!! Waiting eagerly for the next thrilling episode...just a small guidance, hope you do not mind.....Pls pay special attention to exclamation, full stop, comma ,etc.
DeleteThank you Uncle for guiding me. I will try to work on it : )
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